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> 000521 -- An Introduction
> =========================
>
> AUTHOR: dsweet
> COMPOSED: 5/24/00
> STORY:
> The scene opens on the interior of the Rocky Beach Mall.
> It is a typical of mall.
> In fact since it is a California mall it is a typical typical mall.
> Our would be heroes will wonder bewteen the Orange Julius Stand and the Hot Dog
> on a Stick place in the next few minutes.
> Doloris positions herself strategically between these popular eateries in order
> to fulfill her quota.
> Two subjects come into view.
> Their walks lack purpose; they are obvious targets.
> She starts her pitch, "Hi I am Doloris. I work for Other Worlds Travel. Would
> you like to participate in a focus group today?".
> As if she had made their days they reply cheerfully and immediately, "Sure"
> and "Okay".
> "Can I get your names for my records?"
> Doloris has readied her pen and clickboard.
> "Jay Talloway is my name. Here have my card. If you need any legal services
> do hesitate to call."
> Doloris directs the Lawyer toward the conference room door were he meet those
> already in the room ready to start.
> Doloris then turns to cheery looking girl that happened to walking near Jay.
> "My name is Cherry. I am still in High School; am I old enough to participate?"
> "Sure come with me and I will introduce you to the other participants. What's
> you last name?"
>
> I few minutes later Doloris is back in the mall proper scanning the crowd.
> Pickings are getting slim so she decides to wonder towards a Wrestler signing
> autographs, but before she gets there she spots two more that meet the
> profile.
> They are walking in oposite directions and will walk past her simultaneously.
> She checks her hair in the aluminum siding of the Hot Dog on a Stick's lemonade
> dispenser.
> She produces an inspiring smile steps between the two men.
> "Hello I am Doloris Gifthorse. I work for Other Worlds travel what can I do to
> convince you two to participate in a focus group?"
> The tall fellow wearing motorcycle leather from head to toe responds. "What do
> we get out of it."
> "After the hour session you get to spin the wheel of futune."
> "Where you are guarenteed to win fabulous prizes."
> "You can win trips all over the world like Lake Tahoe and Hawaii."
> "There are cash prizes too."
> After a moment of contemplation he says, "where do I go?"
> As if prompted the man next wearing a department of fish and game uniform
> nods his head he'd like to participate as well.
> Jake's and the ranger's names are written down and before long Doloris is back
> at her game.
> The Wrestler is still there and still has just the one child that looks about
> eight in front of him.
> As she walks up the boy ask the man who is apparently called the Black Scorpian
> a question that just must be answered, "If Hulk Hogan and Superman were to
> get in a fight who would win?".
> Black puts his hand to his chin and thinks about this, "Me, I'd win".
> "Ok but if Hulk Hogan and Batman got in a fight who'd win?"
> "Hmmm".
> Doloris breaks in with her speal.
> Black tries to reply that he is too busy signing autographs but the child
> continues, "what about it, Batman and Hulk Hogan?"
> "Me, Me, I'd win."
> "You will win fabulous prizes, Mr. Scorpian".
> "Yeah but what if good Hulk Hogan and bad Hulk Hogan were to fight?"
> In desparation Black says, "Can't I sign an autograph for you lady?"
> She hands him the clipboard and points to the last name field on her form.
> When he is done, "Excellent, let me show you the way to the conference room."
> As the door to the focus group room closes behind Doloris the other
> participants can hear the beginning of a child's question.
> "If Hulk Hogan and"
> Black takes the last seat in the room.
> Jake the motorcycles moves his chair next to the Scorpian.
>
> She asks for everyone to fill out the questionaire in front of them.
> Many have already.
> Doloris says she has to give her form and all of there's to the number
> crunchers and that she will be right back.
>
> Some small talk breaks out in the small room with the one door and the large
> mirror on the north wall.
>
> When she returns she ensures everyone introduces themselves.
> Cherry goes to RBHS and is a Cheerleader.
> "Go Anemones" annouces Jay.
> He says he is a lawyer and that you all may know me from my late night
> commercials.
> The Ranger says he works for the department of fish and game.
> He is working on his masters.
> Jake is a professional motorcyclist who just hasn't gotten his break yet.
> Black simply says, "I float like a Scorpian and sting like a scorpian."
>
> The questions begin.
> Doloris encourages them to answer the questions as a group after a period of
> discussion.
> She takes notes furiously.
> In the end everyone comes to a concensus.
> They agreed that the best vacations would be to far off lands where they are
> not just tourists but participants in the culture.
> It would be good if some cause was served by this participation.
> The final question was asked of each individual, "On a scale from 1 to 10
> where 1 was that your life was prefect and that this prefect vacation didn't
> interest you and 10 was that this sort of vacation was worth dropping
> everything for."
> Everyone but the Lawyer responded with a 9 or 10.
> Strangly, Jay's participation in the focus group indicated vacations were
> trophys to be brought back and showed off to your envious associates said 3.
>
> Doloris wrote down the figures and calculated an average before annoucing the
> hour was up and that she'd be right back with the wheel and there chance to
> spin it.
>
> The more astude hear a door just to the north open and close as the focus room
> door closes behind Doloris.
> Minutes pass.
> Jake stands up to stretch his legs.
> He walks to the door to open it, but it is looked.
> He annouces this to the stunned room.
> Cherry rushes the mirror.
> She puts her face right to it to look through this obvious two way mirror.
> She sees four men in white lab coats and Doloris in a heated debate.
> They notice her and metal slats fold down on the oposite side of the mirror from
> Cherry.
> Her view is completely blocked.
>
> Jay goes to check the door, but it opens for him.
> But instead of hearing the sounds of the mall there is nothing.
> In fact the mall has been replaced with a washed out blue-green painted
> industrial hallway.
> The hallway is a cylinder with many pipes and valves lining its edges.
> Jay concludes that they are simply in the basement and the focus group room
> nothing more then an elvator.
> He walks out.
> Jake follows him.
> Those left in the room see the men motioning and appearing to speak but nothing
> is heard.
> The men have shocked looks on their faces.
> The lawyer steps back into the room with his hands in front of him as if
> searching for a light switch.
> He stumbles and steps through Cherry.
> "He's like a ghost", she screams.
> The ranger has decided they have been placed into some sort of video game and
> also steps into the hall.
> Meanwhile, the men in the hall can no longer see the room, but they can not
> touch anything in the hallway either.
> They do hear the sounds of dripping water, machinery and each other.
> In an attempt to get back to where he was before Jay turns around walks towards
> the direction he came from.
> This is when he steps through Cherry.
> Jake walks to the end of the hallway.
> It ends with a circular hatch with what looks to be a valve knob.
> Before he gets there the substance that makes up the surface of what he is
> walking on stops.
> He does not fall though.
> He just hangs there akwardly.
> He calls the Ranger to pull him back.
> As he walks down the hall he spots a port hole facing what should be south.
> After Jake is back on the walkway and getting ready for his running leap, the
> Ranger walk back to the port hole and sees water on the otherside.
> Stretching out around him is a immense underwater complex.
> The water is inhabitated with albino worm like creatures.
> The only light is coming from the complex.
> There is nothing but darkness above.
>
> Now only Cherry and Black are left in the focus group room.
> They see Jake take a running jump and sail through the hatch at the end of the
> hall.
> Black decides to stick his head and a shoulder through the plane of the
> doorway.
> To his dismay the room disappears.
> Now his head and shoulder inhabit the underwater hallway.
> He walks in the direction of the center of the focus group room.
> Cherry's jaw has dropped.
> She stops pounding on the mirror and walks over to Black.
> Her hand passes through his head but stops on his substantial shoulder.
> Black and Cherry try to communicate with paper and touch but to no avail.
> Finally Black decides to walk into the hallway proper.
> Cherry makes a few more emotional pleas towards the apathetic mirror before
> heading through the doorway with her head hung low.
> A popping noise is heard as the last member steps through.
> Jake falls to the ground.
> He has been floating on the other side of the hatch.
> He turns the hatch knob to open it and sees everyone again.
>
> A lengthy discussion takes place.
> Some are convinced they are under the influence of drugs.
> Other believe they are in an elborate virtual reality game.
> They lawyer feels or holes in his head.
> Black finds one in his ear.
> Everyone agrees with Jake's suggestion that the scropian body slams who ever is
> responsible for the situation.
>
> Eventually they begin to walk.
> Jay uses this time to get everyone's address for the eventual class action.
> Cherry refuses to give the lawyer her information because her mother has warned
> her of men like him.
>
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< Our would be heroes will wonder bewteen the Orange Julius Stand and the Hot Dog
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> Our would be heroes will wonder between the Orange Julius Stand and the Hot Dog
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< Doloris positions herself strategically between these popular eateries in order
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> Dolores positions herself strategically between these popular eateries in order
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< She starts her pitch, "Hi I am Doloris. I work for Other Worlds Travel. Would
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> She starts her pitch, "Hi I am Dolores. I work for Other Worlds Travel. Would
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< Doloris has readied her pen and clickboard.
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> Dolores has readied her pen and clipboard.
25c26
< Doloris directs the Lawyer toward the conference room door were he meet those
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> Dolores directs the Lawyer toward the conference room door were he meet those
27c28
< Doloris then turns to cheery looking girl that happened to walking near Jay.
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> Dolores then turns to cheery looking girl that happened to walking near Jay.
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< I few minutes later Doloris is back in the mall proper scanning the crowd.
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> I few minutes later Dolores is back in the mall proper scanning the crowd.
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< They are walking in oposite directions and will walk past her simultaneously.
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> They are walking in opposite directions and will walk past her simultaneously.
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< "Hello I am Doloris Gifthorse. I work for Other Worlds travel what can I do to
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> "Hello I am Dolores Gifthorse. I work for Other Worlds travel what can I do to
44,45c45,46
< "After the hour session you get to spin the wheel of futune."
< "Where you are guarenteed to win fabulous prizes."
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> "After the hour session you get to spin the wheel of future."
> "Where you are guaranteed to win fabulous prizes."
51c52
< Jake's and the ranger's names are written down and before long Doloris is back
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> Jake's and the ranger's names are written down and before long Dolores is back
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< As she walks up the boy ask the man who is apparently called the Black Scorpian
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> As she walks up the boy ask the man who is apparently called the Black Scorpion
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< Doloris breaks in with her speal.
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> Dolores breaks in with her spiel.
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< "You will win fabulous prizes, Mr. Scorpian".
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> "You will win fabulous prizes, Mr. Scorpion".
67c68
< In desparation Black says, "Can't I sign an autograph for you lady?"
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> In desperation Black says, "Can't I sign an autograph for you lady?"
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< As the door to the focus group room closes behind Doloris the other
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> As the door to the focus group room closes behind Dolores the other
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< Jake the motorcycles moves his chair next to the Scorpian.
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> Jake the motorcycles moves his chair next to the Scorpion.
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< She asks for everyone to fill out the questionaire in front of them.
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> She asks for everyone to fill out the questionnaire in front of them.
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< Doloris says she has to give her form and all of there's to the number
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> Dolores says she has to give her form and all of there's to the number
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< "Go Anemones" annouces Jay.
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> "Go Anemones" announces Jay.
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< Black simply says, "I float like a Scorpian and sting like a scorpian."
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> Black simply says, "I float like a Scorpion and sting like a scorpion."
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< Doloris encourages them to answer the questions as a group after a period of
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> Dolores encourages them to answer the questions as a group after a period of
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< In the end everyone comes to a concensus.
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> In the end everyone comes to a consensus.
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< Strangly, Jay's participation in the focus group indicated vacations were
< trophys to be brought back and showed off to your envious associates said 3.
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> Strangely, Jay's participation in the focus group indicated vacations were
> trophies to be brought back and showed off to your envious associates said 3.
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< Doloris wrote down the figures and calculated an average before annoucing the
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> Dolores wrote down the figures and calculated an average before announcing the
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< The more astude hear a door just to the north open and close as the focus room
< door closes behind Doloris.
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> The more astute hear a door just to the north open and close as the focus room
> door closes behind Dolores.
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< He annouces this to the stunned room.
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> He announces this to the stunned room.
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< She sees four men in white lab coats and Doloris in a heated debate.
< They notice her and metal slats fold down on the oposite side of the mirror from
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> She sees four men in white lab coats and Dolores in a heated debate.
> They notice her and metal slats fold down on the opposite side of the mirror
> from
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< nothing more then an elvator.
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> nothing more then an elevator.
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< He just hangs there akwardly.
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> He just hangs there awkwardly.
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< Ranger walk back to the port hole and sees water on the otherside.
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> Ranger walk back to the port hole and sees water on the other side.
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< Other believe they are in an elborate virtual reality game.
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> Other believe they are in an elaborate virtual reality game.
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< Everyone agrees with Jake's suggestion that the scropian body slams who ever is
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> Everyone agrees with Jake's suggestion that the scorpion body slams who ever is
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< "Where you are guaranteed to win fabulous prizes."
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> "Where you are guaranteed to win a fabulous prize."
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< her of men like him.
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> her of men like him.
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< Black simply says, "I float like a Scorpion and sting like a scorpion."
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> Black simply says, "I float like a scorpion and sting like a scorpion."
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< Everyone agrees with Jake's suggestion that the scorpion body slams who ever is
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> Everyone agrees with Jake's suggestion that the Scorpion body slams who ever is
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< her of men like him.
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> her about men like him.
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< It is a typical of mall.
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> It is a typical mall.
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< do hesitate to call."
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> don't hesitate to call."
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< Dolores then turns to cheery looking girl that happened to walking near Jay.
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> Dolores then turns to the cheery looking girl that happened to be walking near
> Jay.
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< you last name?"
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> your last name?"
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< I few minutes later Dolores is back in the mall proper scanning the crowd.
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> A few minutes later Dolores is back in the mall proper scanning the crowd.
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< "There are cash prizes too."
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> "There are cash prizes too!"
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< As if prompted the man next wearing a department of fish and game uniform
< nods his head he'd like to participate as well.
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> Feeling prompted, the other man wearing a department of fish and game uniform
> nods he'd like to participate as well.
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< The Wrestler is still there and still has just the one child that looks about
< eight in front of him.
< As she walks up the boy ask the man who is apparently called the Black Scorpion
< a question that just must be answered, "If Hulk Hogan and Superman were to
< get in a fight who would win?".
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> The Wrestler is still at his table.
> Above his head on a banner is his name, the Black Scorpion.
> Just in case he wanders away from the table there is a another reminder
> of his name across the front of his muscle shirt.
> Standing in front of the table is a child that looks about eight.
> Dolores walks up to both of them.
> The boy has a question that must be answered, "If Hulk Hogan and Superman were
> to get in a fight who would win?".
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< "Hmmm".
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> "Hmmm", Black ponders.
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< Black tries to reply that he is too busy signing autographs but the child
< continues, "what about it, Batman and Hulk Hogan?"
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> The Wrestler begins to reply that he is too busy signing autographs to help her
> but the child continues, "What about it, Batman or Hulk Hogan?"
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< "You will win fabulous prizes, Mr. Scorpion".
< "Yeah but what if good Hulk Hogan and bad Hulk Hogan were to fight?"
< In desperation Black says, "Can't I sign an autograph for you lady?"
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> "You will win a fabulous prize, Mr. Scorpion".
> "Yeah but what if a good Hulk Hogan and a bad Hulk Hogan were to fight?"
> In desperation Black says, "Can I sign an autograph for you lady?"
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>
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< She asks for everyone to fill out the questionnaire in front of them.
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> Dolores asks for everyone to fill out the questionnaire in front of them.
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< Dolores says she has to give her form and all of there's to the number
< crunchers and that she will be right back.
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> When they are done she says she has to give her form and all of there's to the
> number crunchers and that she will be right back.
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< The final question was asked of each individual, "On a scale from 1 to 10
< where 1 was that your life was prefect and that this prefect vacation didn't
< interest you and 10 was that this sort of vacation was worth dropping
< everything for."
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> The final question was asked of each individual, "On a scale from 1 to 10 how
> important is a vaction like this to you. 1 would be that your life was
> prefect and that this prefect vacation didn't interest you. 10 would be that
> this sort of vacation was worth dropping everything for."
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< trophies to be brought back and showed off to your envious associates said 3.
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> trophies to be brought back and showed off to your envious associates.
> He replied with a 3.
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< hour was up and that she'd be right back with the wheel and there chance to
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> hour was up and that she'd be right back with the wheel and their chance to
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< The more astute hear a door just to the north open and close as the focus room
< door closes behind Dolores.
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> Those with more astute hearing notice a door just to the north open and close
> as the focus group room door closes behind Dolores.
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< from
< Cherry.
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> from Cherry.
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< In fact the mall has been replaced with a washed out blue-green painted
< industrial hallway.
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> In fact the mall has been replaced with an industrial hallway painted in a
> washed out blue-green.
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< nothing more then an elevator.
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> is nothing more then an elevator.
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< He stumbles and steps through Cherry.
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> He stumbles forward and steps through Cherry.
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< Meanwhile, the men in the hall can no longer see the room, but they can not
< touch anything in the hallway either.
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>
> Meanwhile, the men in the hall can no longer see the room.
> As soon as they stepped through they saw nothing but the hallway behind them.
> Even more bizarre, they can not touch anything in the hallway.
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< As he walks down the hall he spots a port hole facing what should be south.
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> As he walks down the hall the Ranger spots a port hole facing what should be
> South.
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< Everyone agrees with Jake's suggestion that the Scorpion body slams who ever is
< responsible for the situation.
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> Everyone agrees with Jake's suggestion that the Scorpion should body slams who
> ever is responsible for their situation.
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< When they are done she says she has to give her form and all of there's to the
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> When they are done, she says she has to give her form and all of thier's to the
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< He says he is a lawyer and that you all may know me from my late night
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> He says he is a lawyer and that they may know him from his late night
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< this sort of vacation was worth dropping everything for."
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> this sort of vacation would be worth dropping everything for."
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< He walks to the door to open it, but it is looked.
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> He walks to the door to open it, but it is locked.
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< She puts her face right to it to look through this obvious two way mirror.
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> She puts her face right to the glass to look through this obvious two way
> mirror.
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< from Cherry.
< Her view is completely blocked.
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> blocking Cherry's view.
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< Jay goes to check the door, but it opens for him.
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> Jay goes to check the door, and it opens for him.
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< It ends with a circular hatch with what looks to be a valve knob.
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> It ends with a circular hatch with what looks to be a valve wheel.
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> He concludes that even though the hallway is beneath his feet that is not what
> everyone is walking on.
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< Ranger walk back to the port hole and sees water on the other side.
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> Ranger walks back to the port hole and sees water on the other side.
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< He turns the hatch knob to open it and sees everyone again.
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> He turns the hatch wheel on his side to open it and sees everyone again.
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< She produces an inspiring smile steps between the two men.
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> She produces an inspiring smile and steps between the two men.
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< The Ranger says he works for the department of fish and game.
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> The ranger says he works for the department of fish and game.
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< He calls the Ranger to pull him back.
< As he walks down the hall the Ranger spots a port hole facing what should be
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> He calls the ranger to pull him back.
> As he walks down the hall the ranger spots a port hole facing what should be
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< Ranger walks back to the port hole and sees water on the other side.
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> ranger walks back to the port hole and sees water on the other side.
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< "Jay Talloway is my name. Here have my card. If you need any legal services
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> "Jake Talloway is my name. Here have my card. If you need any legal services
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< Jay.
< "My name is Cherry. I am still in High School; am I old enough to participate?"
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> Jake.
> "My name is Cherry. I am still in High School; am I old enough to
> participate?"
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< Jake's and the ranger's names are written down and before long Dolores is back
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> Jay's and the Rick's names are written down and before long Dolores is back
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< Jake the motorcycles moves his chair next to the Scorpion.
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> Jay the motorcyclist moves his chair next to the Scorpion.
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< "Go Anemones" announces Jay.
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> "Go Anemones" announces Jake.
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< The ranger says he works for the department of fish and game.
< He is working on his masters.
< Jake is a professional motorcyclist who just hasn't gotten his break yet.
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> Rick, the ranger, says he works for the department of fish and game.
> He is working on his Master's.
> Jay is a professional motorcyclist who just hasn't gotten his break yet.
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< Strangely, Jay's participation in the focus group indicated vacations were
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> Strangely, Jake's participation in the focus group indicated vacations were
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< Jake stands up to stretch his legs.
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> Jay stands up to stretch his legs.
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< Jay goes to check the door, and it opens for him.
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> Jake goes to check the door, and it opens for him.
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< Jay concludes that they are simply in the basement and the focus group room
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> Jake concludes that they are simply in the basement and the focus group room
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< He walks out.
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> Jay rushes past, out into the hall.
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< Jake walks to the end of the hallway.
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> Jay walks to the end of the hallway.
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< He calls the ranger to pull him back.
< As he walks down the hall the ranger spots a port hole facing what should be
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> He calls Rick to pull him back.
> As he walks down the hall Rick spots a port hole facing what should be
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< After Jake is back on the walkway and getting ready for his running leap, the
< ranger walks back to the port hole and sees water on the other side.
---
> After Jay is back on the walkway and getting ready for his running leap, Rick
> walks back to the port hole and sees water on the other side.
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< They see Jake take a running jump and sail through the hatch at the end of the
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> They see Jay take a running jump and sail through the hatch at the end of the
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< Jake falls to the ground.
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> Jay falls to the ground.
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< They lawyer feels or holes in his head.
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> The lawyer feels or holes in his head.
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< Everyone agrees with Jake's suggestion that the Scorpion should body slams who
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> Everyone agrees with Jay's suggestion that the Scorpion should body slams who
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< Jay uses this time to get everyone's address for the eventual class action.
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> Jake uses this time to get everyone's address for the eventual class action.
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< Jay's and the Rick's names are written down and before long Dolores is back
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> Jay's and Rick's names are written down and before long Dolores is back
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< The lawyer feels or holes in his head.
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> The lawyer feels for holes in his head.
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< "My name is Cherry. I am still in High School; am I old enough to
< participate?"
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> "My name is Cherry. I am still in High School; am I old enough to
> participate?"
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> Test.
>
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< Test.
<
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< her about men like him.
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> her about men like him.
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< The scene opens on the interior of the Rocky Beach Mall.
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> The scene opens on the interior of the Rocky Beach Mall on May 21st, 2000.
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< her about men like him.
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> her about men like him.
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< "My name is Cherry. I am still in High School; am I old enough to
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> "My name is Amber. I am still in High School; am I old enough to
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< Cherry goes to RBHS and is a Cheerleader.
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> Amber goes to RBHS and is a Cheerleader.
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< Cherry rushes the mirror.
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> Amber rushes the mirror.
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< blocking Cherry's view.
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> blocking Amber's view.
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< He stumbles forward and steps through Cherry.
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> He stumbles forward and steps through Amber.
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< This is when he steps through Cherry.
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> This is when he steps through Amber.
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< Now only Cherry and Black are left in the focus group room.
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> Now only Amber and Black are left in the focus group room.
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< Cherry's jaw has dropped.
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> Amber's jaw has dropped.
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< Black and Cherry try to communicate with paper and touch but to no avail.
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> Black and Amber try to communicate with paper and touch but to no avail.
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< Cherry makes a few more emotional pleas towards the apathetic mirror before
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> Amber makes a few more emotional pleas towards the apathetic mirror before
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< Cherry refuses to give the lawyer her information because her mother has warned
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> Amber refuses to give the lawyer her information because her mother has warned
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< When they are done, she says she has to give her form and all of thier's to the
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> When they are done, she says she has to give her form and all of their's to the